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Star Trek Enterprise (ENT) Season 4
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The episode descriptions are given in normal text, my comments in small text. Rating: 0=worst, 10=best (rating system)
Storm Front
No date given: In the year 1944, the Nazis have conquered parts of the USA with
the help of their alien allies from the 29th century, led by Vosk. American
resistance forces free Archer, who wakes up in the apartment of Alicia in the
Nazi-occupied Brooklyn. Daniels appears on Enterprise, near-death, explaining
that the Temporal Cold War has escalated, and that agents are changing history
in many centuries. Silik crawls through the ship, attacks Tucker and steals a
shuttlepod in which he escapes to New York. In the meantime, Archer, Alicia and
her gang meet with one of the aliens. Alicia's friend Sal kills the alien, but
not before Archer can get his communicator and contact Enterprise to be beamed
up. Tucker and Mayweather, on the other hand, are captured by the
Nazis while they are searching for Silik. Vosk is willing to return Tucker and
Mayweather if Archer agrees to meet with him. But back on Enterprise, the
alleged Tucker turns out to be Silik. Still, Archer and Silik join in an effort
to find Tucker and to destroy a temporal conduit that is intended to bring Vosk
back to his century. Alicia and the resistance group help them get into the
building. Silik is killed, but Archer can find Tucker just before Enterprise
blows up the facility. The ship returns to a 22nd century where everything is
normal again.

I'm almost lacking the words to describe this disaster. "Storm Front" is an offense against
the intelligence and the good taste of Star Trek fans. Right now, I am
staring at the computer screen, struggling to write at least a few words, but it
just gives me a headache. What I anticipated was a decent time travel story,
only impaired by the exploitation of Hollywood's large pool of Nazi stereotypes. I
was biased against a Nazi story for very good reasons, and I guess I've written enough about
that in my review of "Zero Hour". But
"Storm Front" turned out awful on almost all other accounts too. It is totally brainless even if we try to forget for a moment that it is based on the
ludicrous idea of Space Nazis. In the tradition of pulp stories it
is overcrowded with gaping plot holes, plot twists out of thin air, superficial protagonists
who act erratically, unintentional humor and unmotivated action. And finally a resolution where just something needs to be blown up
to save Earth, just as in "Zero Hour". The Nazi theme is just the
icing on the cake. Quite obviously the episode has been developed in a
wrong direction, as the initial premise required alien Nazis and they
were being included no matter how stupid it would turn out. In an attempt to see
any merit in the theme, we may try to regard "Storm Front" as a remake of
"The City on the Edge of Forever" (some motives are the same), but
such a decent and intelligent story is not perceptible amidst the noise of
rattling machine guns and bawling Nazis.
We are also looking at the perhaps worst time travel episode ever made, one where the sudden
temporal dislocation is essentially just an excuse to let the brave crew fight
against evil aliens and Nazis and then magically return to their own century.
Even if the fan base is tired of the side effects of time travel after seeing so many of them, I think it is a complete waste to make a time
travel episode devoid of any such ideas. Following the trend that
Enterprise's time travel stories are dumbed down compared to those of TNG or
Voyager, nothing is even supposed to
make sense here. Not the slightest attempt is made to explain anything, the
blunt remark "That's beyond your comprehension" is meant to suffice.
As if blurring and even denying the problems would make everything more
plausible. Is this still science fiction? No.
The overall tone of the episode is like the authors keep telling us that killing
Nazis is such an honorable goal that it doesn't matter when, where, how, with
whose help and in which universe it is done. In a story with Nazis there is never
a question whether the enemy is evil and whether the enemy has to be destroyed at all cost. In
light of the unsurpassable evilness of Nazis it
isn't surprising that the heroes, and all of them, kill any Nazis they meet with
a certain satisfaction. No surprise at least by Hollywood standards. But isn't
this still supposed to be Star Trek, a series with a reputation to seek peaceful
solutions, where we habitually have weapons on stun instead of deadly bullets, where
the lives even of the most dangerous aliens are spared if in any way
possible? In "Storm Front", in contrast, German soldiers are frequently
and uncompromisingly slaughtered. These soldiers could have been my grandfathers of
whom one died in the final weeks of WW II and the other one spent five years in one of Stalin's death camps in
Siberia. Two Germans
in the episode were making racist jokes when
Archer and Alicia were walking by, but this was the general tone of the era (and not only in Germany) that hopefully never comes back.
Clearly the common German soldiers were fighting for the wrong goal and they were
infected by Nazi propaganda. Some of them were criminals, but what gives the Star Trek producers the right to depict them as something less worth living than silicon crystals
or plasma blobs -- or New York mobsters?
One interesting thing I noticed despite all my anger was that, with the Nazis
and Vosk, the authors tried to establish an alliance between two like-minded
powers. This is a lot more fitting than the Hirogen's fondness of Nazi cruelties
in VOY: "The Killing Game". The Hirogen are hunters, who chase and
torture other beings just because it's their nature (or so they think). The
Nazis are fanatic racists, who think they have the right to suppress and ultimately
extinguish anyone who is not like them. In this regard Vosk is much more
"human". It wouldn't even have required his emotional speech about
"the mastery of time" to emphasize that. It just created a contrived
literal parallel. At least it helped to make the alliance at least a little bit
plausible. Still, I am sure that red-eyed aliens would be the first to put
against the wall by the SS. And that Vosk could have found far better allies and
far better technology in Earth's history -- and most of all a far better place
to build a secret installation than a city full of partisans in a just occupied
country.
Speaking of plot holes, they all somehow merge to a big question mark because
nothing really made any sense. Let us look at Silik. What the heck was he doing
all the time? None of his actions seemed to serve any particular goal. Why was
he crawling through the ship in the first place, what was his business on Earth
that he needed a shuttlepod for, why did he spare Trip's life (Malcolm added
exactly this question to his own list, but still I want to know), why did he
later replace Trip and then return to Enterprise? And most importantly, since when
are Suliban perfect shapeshifters? We've seen the woman in "Broken
Bow" do that and Silik himself in "Cold Front", but imitating
someone whom Archer knows well is a completely different thing than just playing
another alien.
On a totally different note, I just can't believe that other reviewers almost
unanimously praised the visual effects of the episode. I was appalled how unreal
the shuttlepod looked in the sky above San Francisco, the texture and the light
reflections just didn't feel right, and it was overall much too crisp. The White
House with Nazi flags was even worse. This looked like a mediocre matte painting
and could have been done much better using real pictures. Finally, the air
combat with the colorful stukas just cried "video game". I have to
concede that space battles are generally easier to do because we can't really
tell how it would look like. But bearing in mind that we know well how planes
and buildings on Earth look like, I would have expected much more from the CGI
wizards, or they should have better begged the producers to forgo these
particular visual effects. Another scene I didn't like at all was when Daniels
(suddenly healthy again) showed Archer a clip show of history. This looked just
cheap and was overly emotional. Something I actually enjoyed (and not only from
a technical viewpoint) was the news reel about Hitler in New York. I was worried
that this could become ridiculous when I read the first spoilers about the
second part, but the way it turned out it was frighteningly realistic, with
exactly the right imagery and tone of those days.
Remarkably scary quotes: "Americans are good at making movies. They're not
so good at fighting." (German officer, just before he is ambushed by
American partisans), "No need for extermination camps" (Vosk, about
the possibility to kill non-Aryans with a pathogen)
Remarkable fact: In the alternate reality, Lenin was killed in 1916. His
revolution never took place, Russia didn't become Communist and wasn't
considered a threat by Germany, so Hitler could conquer Europe without facing
major resistance (I strongly disagree, history is not that one-dimensional!)
Lost shuttles: 1
Rating: 0
Home
No date given: After an official celebration Archer attends a de-briefing in
which Soval reproaches him with not trying to save the crew of the Vulcan ship
inside the Expanse, which upsets Archer. The captain takes a break and goes on a
climbing tour when suddenly Erika Hernandez, the captain of NX-02 Columbia,
joins him. Tired of all the fighting and of being the hero who saved Earth,
Archer wonders what has become of the once peaceful mission of Starfleet and of
himself. Xenophobia shows its ugly face on Earth when Dr. Phlox is harassed in a
bar. Meanwhile on Vulcan, T'Pol visits her mother, T'Les, and introduces Tucker
to her. T'Les notices that the two are romantically involved. But she has other
concerns, as she was expelled from her position in the Vulcan Science Academy
because her daughter is a persona non grata since the P'Jem incident. In order
to restore the reputation of her family, T'Pol marries Koss whose father is
influential. On Earth, Archer apologizes to Soval, and the Vulcan ambassador
stretches out his hand, thanking Archer for the service he has done to both
worlds.

This decent character-building episode may have been quite purposely written to
be reminiscent of TNG: "Family", possibly one of the most successful of
its kind. However, I think "Home" should have been aired earlier to put
a worthy end to the Xindi arc, erasing the last few minutes of
"Zero Hour" and all the Nazi crap that followed from history. Well, in
some fashion that will never be explained it all didn't happen anyway. The way everything makes sense again
in "Home", in real space and time, clearly demonstrates how stupid the
departure to the erratic Nazi timeline was in the first place, and how
dissatisfactory it was to abruptly discard the whole idea without answering any questions. I can only say I'm
glad it's over and we can move on.
Now that Archer and his crew have saved their planet even twice by blowing up
mean alien machines in just a few days it is time for a celebration. They truly
deserve it, even though the celebration in the huge stadium on the roof of a
skyscraper is a tad too pompous. Subsequently the episode quickly finds its way
back to the normal track of the series during the de-briefing. Soval,
self-righteous as always, has nothing better to do than accusing Archer of what
he has done or neglected to do inside the Expanse. As if we would have expected
anything else. Only the usual reproach that humans are not mature enough to go
into space was missing this time. But the surprise comes in the end. Archer
apologizes. I have great respect for that, after all it was the Vulcan who
treated Archer like the suspect of a crime and, maybe still worse, didn't give a
dawn on the captain's word that he did everything to save those Vulcans. And now
Soval comes forward and does three amazing things. He says he was wrong about
Archer, he stretches out his hand although Vulcans don't touch each other and he
thanks the captain, something that, as T'Les wittingly states in the same
episode, is a human custom. The continuity to "Impulse" makes this part of the plot
perfect, even though I
found the 3rd season episode appalling.
On the other hand, I don't care much for Archer's interaction with Erika
Hernandez, except for her reminding Archer of what he was like before his ship
became a flying armory. We can be sure that a possible love affair of the two
captains would not be picked up again in the future, so this only reason to make
Archer's mirror character a woman isn't really that important. Knowing that they
used to date or even had an affair a rather long time ago reminds me of Kirk's
and Picard's many acquaintances that used to show up in one episode and then
vanished forever. As a character who primarily represents the enthusiasm that Archer
has lost, I would have preferred a visibly younger man instead of her as the
captain of NX-02, a guy whom Archer may not even have personally known before. I
think that Archer would have been well able to find what he has lost without a
kiss from a woman. Still, overall it is quite palpable how Archer is torn
between his military duty and his role as a hero on one hand and his lost
innocence on the other hand. The only thing that really annoys me in that course
is Archer's nightmare about the Xindi-Reptilians attacking him. This is simply
obnoxious, especially considering that the Xindi are dead and buried (at least
as a story arc). The episode wouldn't have needed any contrived action like
that. I was never even near the verge of falling asleep while I was watching it.
There are more examples of excellent continuity in the episode. The story of
P'Jem crops up once again, here as the reason for T'Les to lose her job. While
I'm otherwise not happy about Vulcans who are shown as prone to seek revenge, I
find it quite fitting that it may get T'Pol's mother into trouble, especially
considering how great a role family ties seem to play on Vulcan. I don't think
that T'Pol's hurried marriage with Koss to restore her mother's honor (well, she
wouldn't call it "honor", but it's much the same) is a witty twist. At
least she doesn't change her mind in the very last second as many fans may have
expected or hoped for. On an interesting side note, the Vulcan dignitary recites
exactly the same words during the marriage ceremony as T'Pau in TOS: "Amok
Time". Only that this time the bride doesn't call for kalifee, the fight to
the death. T'Pol mentions that just as an option, and not a serious one. So far
continuity is preserved, bearing in mind that T'Pring is the first to demand
that in many centuries. On the other hand, Koss' reaction is like he is not
only familiar with it but prepared for it, so kalifee almost seems to be a
customary ritual in his view.
Finally there is the plot thread about xenophobia on Earth. Although this is the
thinnest of the three and may not be meant to be ever continued, its impact is
quite powerful. I think it is the first time on Star Trek that a present-day
problem of Earth is tackled without disguising it or making it an issue of an
alien planet-of-the-week. I can well imagine that in the future much the same
kind of guys who harass humans of other racial and cultural heritage today may
be running around and go for aliens. Racism is literally universal, and this
becomes obvious here like rarely before. Just one week after the brainless Nazi
trash here is a realistic and serious scenario as food for thought. The fact
that Phlox seems to cope rather easily with the harassment at first (as we would
expect from his character) but that eventually we can't be sure about that only
emphasizes that racism doesn't start as late as there are physical attacks.
Remarkable quotes: "Things have changed since Enterprise left spacedock.
You spend a lot of your time boldly going into battle." (Archer, to
Hernandez), "You've done a great service to both our worlds." (Soval,
to Archer)
Remarkable scenery: It is the first time that we see a real Vulcan city and not
only mystical places. It's still only desert, and we have to wonder if there is
or has ever been agriculture anywhere on the planet. The building encompasses a
garden though, and this looks very Japanese to me.
Remarkable facts: Phlox can pump up his face, probably as a defensive action in
the presence of danger. -- The planet of "Strange New World" is in a star
system left of Polaris as seen from Earth. -- Vulcan is 16 light-years away from
Earth. -- Guests in Vulcan houses are expected to prepare the morning meal at 04:00.
Now that's truly inhuman(e)! -- Two or three dozen schools in North America are
already named for Jonathan Archer. -- A WWIII epic won several movie (Academy?)
awards.
Crew losses: 27 altogether
Rating: 5
Borderland
May 17th, 2154: Augments are genetically enhanced humans whose embryos were left
over from the Eugenics Wars. Stolen from a lab by the ruthless scientist Arik
Soong some 20 years ago, several now adult Augments have captured a Klingon ship
in the Borderland, the volatile region between the Orions and the Klingon
Empire. Enterprise leaves spacedock on a mission to find and apprehend them.
Arik Soong is aboard to assist the crew. He helps to free some Enterprise crew
members from an Orion slave market, but when Enterprise encounters the Augments
who regard him as their father, he joins them and leaves the disabled Starfleet
ship behind...

I liked the concept of Augments who grew from frozen embryos as a very
intelligent way to tackle the Eugenics Wars without messing up Trek history even
more. Likewise, getting Brent Spiner on the show to play Arik Soong, the
unethical ancestor of Data's creator Noonien Soong, was a terrific move, not
only to boost ratings. But what was made of these ideas largely failed to
convince me in this first installment of the Augments trilogy.
On the whole,
"Borderland" developed to nothing more than an average action episode
using motives that are just too common and predictable. At times I had the
impression I was watching a re-run of "Broken Bow". Not really due to
the use of stock footage of Enterprise leaving the dock, but rather because the
course of the plot and many of its minutiae were essentially the same.
Enterprise is crippled by an attack from a previously unseen enemy, someone is
abducted, an away team tries to find them on the generic dirty alien trade
outpost. I didn't like to see the Ogres (sorry, Orions) anyway. At least not at
this time. The episode was littered with references to Trek history, plus
several new terms like "Augments" or "Borderland", and it
might have been wiser to limit the scope to just Earth's problem with the
remnants of the Eugenics Wars. The way it was done, it seems that the plot was
just stretched to three episodes using many secondary and overall distracting
threads.
Regarding the Augments, as much as I liked the basic idea, I found their
motivation, behavior and look little compelling. Some more interesting facets
may be added in the two episodes to come, but here they appeared as nothing more
than a post-apocalyptic adolescent gang like in so many bad movies. They
represented the worst of humanity (the insatiable desire for power, with the
almost cutesy excuse that they were just seeking a home) and behaved like a bunch
of school kids with an odd love for their "father". It is very hard to
believe that they are
supposed to be superior and to be the future of humanity, according to Arik
Soong. Although I understand that his character may develop in a
Frankenstein-like direction in that he suffers from the affection he has
developed for the monster he created, so far only Brent Spiner's talent to let
the viewers hang on his lips prevents him from being just a throwaway mad
scientist. Finally, the Augments' torn clothes may befit the look of Khan's
people in "Star Trek II", but they should have been wearing something
tidy, which would have made the parallel to the Trek movie and to the generic
post-apocalyptic gang less overt.
There were some witty details that I liked much more than the plot itself.
Soong, for instance, disabled the beacon that was supposed to locate him through
the electrostatic discharge from an Orion "painstick". Furthermore, when Soong
climbed up a wall in his attempt to escape, Archer used the remote control of
his prisoner's handcuffs to unfasten them so Soong fell down.
Remarkable quote: "Jonathan Archer. What brings you here? Are they naming
the prison for you?" (Arik Soong)
Remarkable facts: T'Pol is now a full member of the Starfleet crew as Commander
T'Pol. Archer gets a new captain's chair. -- The lighting in the background of the
transporter pads seems to be different. It now reminds me more of TOS than
before. -- Archer's father died of Clark's disease, something that Soong claims he
could heal.
Rating: 5
Cold Station 12
No date given: An Enterprise landing party picks up Smike, an Augment who was
left behind because he had not developed superior abilities. In the meantime
Soong and the other Augments have occupied the facility Cold Station 12 where
the remaining 1800 Augment embryos are stored. The human and Denobulan
scientists working there, among them Phlox's friend Dr. Lucas, are taken
hostages. Archer and Phlox themselves fall into the hand of the terrorists when
their attempt to free the hostages fails. When the Augments threaten to kill Dr.
Phlox, Lucas reveals the access code to the containment chambers. Enterprise
attempts to destroy the station but is attacked by the hijacked Klingon
Bird-of-Prey. The terrorist leader, who has been favoring extreme violence
against the will of his father Soong, kills Smike. They escape unscathed and take
the the embryos with them. The scientists and the landing party remain on the
station where deadly viruses are about to be exposed...

I liked it. Actually I wouldn't have expected the overused motive of a hostage
crisis to be that exciting. Yet, sometimes Trek writers succeed in making
something special even of an undemanding outline that wouldn't allow too much
variation, especially since it was the middle part of a three-episode arc in
this case. Although "Cold Station 12" didn't bear too many surprises
for this reason, the story arc was consequently advanced. While the plot of
"Borderland" still struggled to find its way through the exposition,
as it had to introduce many people and places, "Cold Station 12" was appealing just
because it focused on one place and on known characters. Even Dr. Lucas as
Phlox's friend was in some way familiar, as he had been previously mentioned in
the show (most notably in "Dear Doctor"), so his character didn't
strike me as too contrived.
We could expect that the creatures would turn against their creator, and it was
a clearly recognizable tendency of the plot that Soong's plan to improve mankind
just didn't get along with the Augments' unadorned desire to rule and to exert
violence. Ironically, while Soong has gained his freedom and is close to
accomplishing his dream of what he thinks is a better future, he is visibly
losing control. This is sad because what Soong said was still something to
ponder about in "Borderland", whereas we are now left with the
Augments in power whose actions are mostly determined by their mere instinct. As
a result, Brent Spiner's presence in the role of Soong is not as strong as still
in "Borderland". This loss of intellectual substance is a shortcoming
of the episode, along with the overdose of violence, although the latter is
acceptable here. The violence contributes to the story in that it divides Soong and his "children".
Smike was an overall pleasant character, although my first idea of him was that
of a "generic savage kid who needs guidance" as we have seen them so
often on Trek. But he ended up as the martyr of the week. Well, that is
obviously another cliché, but a useful one, because he has been expelled from
the group much like a wolf pack would abandon their weakest member. And that is
essentially what the Augments are. Only that I don't think that wolves wittingly
kill one another, that much is not instinctive behavior but rather human
cold-bloodedness.
On the technical side, I wonder how simply extending the transporter range could
allow the crew to beam onto the planetoid from outside the system. Soong could
obviously monitor the ship only seconds after it was said it was only 12 million
kilometers away! -- Another problem I have is with the Denobulan shuttle.
Clearly the large bridge indicates that it is a ship of 20-30m length at the
very least, yet it looks smaller than the bridge section of the Klingon BoP when
the ships encounter for the first time. But to make things much worse, when
Soong and the Augments escape from CS-12 with 1800 embryos, the Denobulan
shuttle approaches the supposed shuttlebay at the rear end of the BoP, and it
seems to be just a few meters long, much smaller than its cockpit alone! Whether
such a ship with the required capacity could land in the BoP's shuttlebay at all
is highly doubtful so there is a general blunder in the plot.
Remarkable fact: The deadly illnesses listed include Xenopolycythemia (TOS:
"For the World is Hollow and I Have Touched the Sky"), Synthococcus
Novae Type A, Rigelian Fever (TOS: "Requiem for Methuselah"), Telurian
Plague (TNG: "A Matter of Time").
Rating: 7
The Augments
No date given: Enterprise evacuates the Cold Station 12 crew and the landing
party from the station and takes a pursuit course for the Bird-of-Prey of the
Augments. An attempt to stop them fails when the Augments drop the Denobulan
shuttle in the atmosphere of a gas giant. The Starfleet crew first has to
mount a rescue mission. Soong flees from the Augments' starship in an escape pod
and agrees to help the Starfleet crew in the hopes that he may convince his
"children" to surrender. But they cross the Klingon border with the goal
to use a bioweapon on a colony. Enterprise can destroy the weapon with Soong's
help. After the Bird-of-Prey has been disabled, the Augments' leader destroys his
vessel. Yet, he actually escapes to Enterprise to take revenge on his creator,
which Archer averts with a deadly phase rifle blast.

"The Augments" is the expected (or should I say
predictable?) conclusion of the story arc. It bears surprises only in the
execution, not in the basic course of the story. It was quite obvious that the
Augments would all perish, preferably in a self-destruct of their ship, and that
their "father" would have to witness that. Well, at times I pitied
Soong despite of all his misdeeds. It was just too pathetic when he threatened
to put his "children" under curfew as if that were a adequate punishment for murder. But overall, action was given precedence over
characterization. The episode had a couple of innovative ideas, like the stunt
of beaming out Archer from the decompressing shaft or the benefit of having a
grappler to tear another ship's nacelle apart. Yet, we have seen most of the
other motives many times before. Just like the trick to fake a warp signature,
the use of a non-existing escape pod on a Klingon vessel or the firing at a weak
spot of an enemy starship that only one key person knows of. Finally and worst
of all, there is the horror thriller cliché of the villain, who is last seen in
the middle of an explosion he couldn't possibly survive but appears once again
out of thin air just to get back at a traitor.
The fast pace of the episode did not permit to take care of ethical concerns
with the due profundity. In spite of or just because of this haste I wonder what the Starfleet crew
could and what they should have done differently. The mission
objective was to stop the Augments to avert a war, and I am sure that Captain
Archer had the authority to apply whatever force he deemed necessary. At latest
since the attack on Cold Station 12 it was unmistakable that there was no
arguing with these gangsters and that they were determined to subdue or destroy
humanity. They had 1800 embryos to create more soldiers of their kind and were
about to release a bioweapon and kill millions. Wouldn't it have been Archer's
duty to fire all available weapons at them when he had the chance, more
precisely when they had just released the Denobulan shuttle inside the gas
giant? Perhaps there would have been a possibility to rescue the Denobulan pilot
later, and if not, it wouldn't have mattered where she had to die. In any case
it would have been a much smaller sacrifice than shooting down civilian
airplanes that are being used as flying bombs. From a viewpoint of storytelling
this incident was no intelligent move either, as the threat to kill a hostage
couldn't strike us or the Enterprise crew as particularly cruel after what had
happened on Cold Station 12. Why is the episode trying to be
"Trekkier" than it was realistic, why doe Archer repeatedly hesitate
and concedes the Augments a chance to surrender? A related issue is how
forthcoming Archer is to Soong in the end. Wasn't it that in
"Borderland" the two couldn't stand each other, and now after the
capital crimes Soong committed or approved of, Archer rewards him with
a guest quarter and a visit to his prison? The latter obviously just to allow
Soong to deliver the most contrived line of the whole arc, "Cybernetics
-- artificial lifeforms. I doubt I finish my work myself, it'll take a
generation or two", followed by a Data-like smile. There was a better
concealed allusion to TNG when Soong pondered what went wrong with the Augments
and concluded there was an error in their genome that needs to be corrected.
This sounds familiar when we think Lore and Data. On the other hand, especially
this statement ultimately confirmed the prevalent notion that the Augments were
a failure and as such a somehow inferior race.
Based on the bare facts the outcome of the story arc is that the Augments are
wild animals that you better kill before they come for you. But in a figurative
sense, aren't they just hollow movie villains in the first place, who just happen
to be genetically engineered? Their characterization was incredibly
one-dimensional in all of the three parts and not much more profound than that
of the dreadful Space Nazis. The bottom line is that tampering with
human genes is not only unethical but intrinsically creates monsters. This
stance has been more or less consistent through the history of Star Trek since
the days of TOS: "Space Seed", but it has never been promoted with
such a passion as in the story arc about the Augments. With the exception of the
unfortunate Smike, who was arguably different, the Augments were not given a
chance to show any positive facet, the honor of being a criminal who shows
remorse goes to Soong but not to any of them. I don't think this idea is
particularly Trek-like or tolerant, bearing in mind that the Augments are much
like an ethnic group and not only a bunch of criminals.
The remarks about Khan ("Botany Bay is a myth") were decent and
skillful with regard to Trek history. Yet, there was the statement about "everything
said about augments in the last 150 years..." which may be taken as a
hint that Augments existed as soon as 1992. But perhaps it refers to the
beginning of the genetic experiments on humans, just like we celebrate the
anniversary of any technology relating to its first inception, not to a time
when it was in common use.
Remarkable quote: "Superior ability creates superior ambition. One of
their creators wrote that. He was murdered by an Augment." (Archer, to
Soong)
Remarkable display: The Klingon colony bears a striking resemblance to
Earth.
Actually the visible hemisphere looks just like Earth except that Europe is
fused into Africa and there is a sea instead of the Congo region. A parallel Earth?
Remarkable fact: Soong heads for Klach D'kel Brakt, which he calls the
"Briar Patch".
Rating: 5
The Forge
No date given: A bomb explosion in the United Earth Embassy on Vulcan kills at
least 43, among them Admiral Forrest, who rescues Ambassador Soval's life. DNA
residue suggests that a woman named T'Pau, member of a sect known as the Syrranites, planted the bomb. Archer and T'Pol seek for the
Syrranites in the
Forge with the help of a map from T'Pol's mother T'Les, who is a Syrranite
herself. The Forge is a Vulcan desert with heavy electromagnetic storms that
disable any communication. Meanwhile on Enterprise, it is found that the
evidence against T'Pau was forged. As Soval learns through a mind meld with a
survivor, the aide to the Administrator of the High Command, V'Las, must have
brought the bomb into the building. In the Forge, T'Pol and Archer meet a man,
Arev, who is obviously a Syrranite. He explains them that his group is peaceful
and is pursuing the true path of Surak, the father of Vulcan philosophy. One of
the Syrranites is even said to carry Surak's katra, his immortal essence. Arev is
killed in one of the storms, but not before mind-melding with Archer.

Fascinating. This is the series as it should have been from
the very beginning. Before "The Forge" there was Star Trek and there
was Enterprise. In a quite compelling fashion the Vulcan story arc reconciles
the two universes to a considerable extent. It helps to rationalize why the
Vulcans of the 22nd century were not the peaceful and benevolent people we know
from the 24th century. Even if the Vulcan trilogy initially damages the
reputation of Vulcans or at least of their rulers even more than before,
everything is resolved in an intelligent and agreeable way. Vulcan has found the
true path, and so has Star Trek Enterprise -- hopefully. Most importantly the
imprudently established misconception that only a small fraction of the Vulcan population could perform
mind melds is elegantly explained as a lie fabricated by the High Command to be
used against the Syrranites. The mind meld dilemma is ingeniously modeled as a vital
part of the story without ever appearing contrived. This alone deserves high
praise. Two thumbs up for the writers, Judith and Garfield Reeves-Stevens!
The episode has a fast pace but sufficient room for character development too,
even if this is largely achieved by isolating two of them, namely Archer and
T'Pol, in a standard situation. Their stay in the Forge slows down the second
half of the episode, and while they are not achieving any visible progress the
more interesting events take place on Enterprise and on Vulcan. Most of all I
was astonished how the formerly stubborn, even cynical Soval suddenly came to be
an ardent supporter of the human cause -- and of the Syrranite cause as well.
Well, in some fashion Admiral Forrest (I will miss him!) was a personal friend.
But it makes even more sense if we think of the Vulcan High Command or at least V'Las'
version thereof as a stage where everyone has to play his role. The High Command
reminds me a lot of a degraded Communist government where no one acts in
accordance to the "true path" any longer but no one could ever freely
admit that. Soval has taken the chance now that he has found natural allies in
the humans. In this regard it was unnecessary and counterproductive to make him
a "melder", someone who must have been disagreeing with the High
Command all the time. Even though all Vulcans can meld as we learn later, he must
have been practicing mind melds against the doctrine of his superiors. Anyway,
the character of Soval could only improve, as we have known him so far just as a
sarcastic detractor of humanity who hides behind phrases every time he is proven
wrong. I like this new Soval better!
On a related note, it was a bit contrived too that T'Pol's mother belonged to
the Syrranites. Is Vulcan full of dissenters? If this were so, how could V'Las
rise to power without facing major resistance? However, we have enough
precedents on Earth where the citizens just remained passive while their rights
were gradually taken away.
It is easy to see the parallels of this story arc to recent events on our own
planet, no matter if they were constructed purposely or just because the
episodes are skillfully written and hence very "life-like". The
bombing of the embassy is a symbol just like 9/11. And many aspects are the same,
just like the increased security precautions in the wake of the embassy blast
that are likely to restrict civil rights. I refrain from further
political comments, although some of the patterns of the High Command's crusade
against the Syrranites look familiar too, be it intentional or not.
Almost needless to mention that the episode is visually spectacular too. We see
a Vulcan landscape with large statues much like in the Director's Edition of
TMP. Moreover, there is the nicely done Federation Embassy (even if the
typically angular human construction doesn't really pay respect to Vulcan
building tradition).
It was a nice idea to pick up the idea of an inner eyelid of Vulcans (TOS:
"Operation: Annihilate"). But how could an eyelid protect T'Pol
against the burning sun if her eyes are open all the time? Other references to
previous Vulcan episodes include the sehlat (TOS: "Journey to Babel",
TAS: "Yesteryear") that we get to see in real life for the first time.
There is also the IDIC symbol that T'Pol gets from her mother. We will see later
that the symbol represents Mount Seleya with the sun in the background. A
similar yet somewhat different symbol can be seen in the meeting room of the
High Command. Soval uses the same words as Spock and most other Vulcans when he
melds with the comatose patient. Finally, we see how Arev turns to Archer
briefly before his death, touching him and whispering something. We would be
damned if we didn't recognize that as a katra transfer and as a homage to
"Star Trek II".
Remarkable quotes: "Sounds like that Klingon opera Hoshi made us listen
to." (Archer, about the sehlat noise), "They are smaller --
slightly." (T'Pol, about domesticated sehlats), "Surak tells
us, it is the heritage of every Vulcan, even those who don't believe in the
practice." (Arev/Syrran/Surak, about mind melds)
Remarkable fact: It took 1500 years to rebuild the Vulcan society and travel to
the stars after the Awakening, 1800 years ago.
Rating: 8
Awakening
No date given: Archer and T'Pol arrive in the Syrranite sanctuary, where they
learn that man who called himself Arev was actually Syrran himself, the founder
of the movement. It turns out that Archer is now carrying Surak's katra. Surak
tells Archer to go search for the Kir'Shara, an ancient artifact that holds his
original writings and that could help renew the Vulcan society. T'Pau makes an
effort to recover Surak's katra through a mind meld with Archer, but she fails.
Soval is about to lose his position because of the mind meld he performed, and
he tries in vain to convince the High Command that the traitors are actually
among them. The former ambassador returns to Enterprise. An attempt to rescue
Archer and T'Pol from the Forge is unsuccessful, and Enterprise has to retreat
when Vulcan cruisers attack the ship. Archer, T'Pol and Surak find the Kir'Shara
while the area is being bombarded by the High Command. T'Les dies in the attack.
Meanwhile on Enterprise, Soval reveals the High Command's plans to attack the
Andorians because these are allegedly going to launch a Xindi weapon against
Vulcan. Trip sets a course for Andorian space.

"Awakening" must have been facing
the usual problem of a middle part of a trilogy, to serve as a link that needs
to be designed with two interfaces. Despite this intrinsic disadvantage, the
episode ranks still higher in my view than "The Forge". Actually, I
think it is even the best Enterprise episode so far! Yet, I can't really tell
why. Some of the twists like the revelation that Archer is carrying Surak's
katra were not surprising at all. Some motives like Archer's communication with
Surak looked quite familiar as it was much the same as Sisko's visions of the
Prophets. There was even a rather childish cookie-cutter scene with the massive door that
opened smoothly in an Indiana Jones-like fashion after 1800 years by just
pushing a button. Furthermore, I don't really see a sense in letting T'Les die,
who may have been a key figure in more Vulcan-based stories and in a
continuation of the mother-daughter conflict.
But in spite of these points of slight criticism, "Awakening" is just
an excellent drama with just the right share of action. In a (possibly daring)
comparison to "Star Trek III" the portrayal of Archer who is possessed
by Surak's mind is much better solved than with McCoy and Spock, respectively.
The humorous characterization in the movie always seemed rather silly to me. I
like this version of Surak anyway because he is shown as a gentle and prudent leader, one that would win the hearts of the people and not just lecture and
command them. And Scott Bakula looks great although he still isn't exactly the
best actor. The honor of best acting falls to Connor Trinneer once again whose interaction
with Soval is just wonderful. In some fashion the two are like the prototypes of
Kirk and Spock.
It is well possible that the supposed disadvantage of being just part 2 of 3
actually helped "Awakening". The writing could build upon what was
there in the first part without the need to explain everything new, while it is
not necessary to tie all loose threads together like in a final part. This
worked in the Final Chapter of DS9 and even more obviously in ENT:
"Countdown" too. Anyway, "Awakening" gets nine points. I'm
rating the episodes of the trilogies separately, expecting many arcs like these
still to come, which would otherwise significantly reduce the number of episodes
in my statistics. Well, if there will be more excellent three-parters like this
one, it will always be a triple boost of my ratings. :-)
Remarkable quotes: "Deception has never been a stranger to this
room". (Soval), "The culture you've come to know isn't the one
I helped to create." (Surak, to Archer)
Remarkable dialogues: "I lived on Earth for more than 30 years,
Commander. In that time I developed an affinity for your world and your
people." - "You did a pretty good job hiding it." - "Thank
you." (Soval and Tucker), "How many warning shots do Vulcans
usually fire?" - "None." (Tucker and Soval)
Remarkable scene: One particular scene that I remember is when Archer has a
vision of the Vulcan civil war. Surak says, "Vulcan is tearing itself
apart", while Archer is watching how an atomic mushroom forms. Although
there have been much more cruel scenes in Star Trek, this one is particularly
moving, as during the whole story arc Vulcan is modeled after Earth.
Remarkable fact: It is quite obvious that the young woman T'Pau is supposed to
be the same as the old person of that name that will be present during Spock's
canceled wedding in TOS: "Amok Time". Yet, it was not hinted at --
fortunately, because it would have been just as contrived as Arik Soong's
talking about his offsprings. Agreed, T'Pau will become a bit more bony and
stubborn, but I don't find it too hard to accept.
Remarkable ships: We see two new Vulcan starship types, or rather previously
seen ships in new roles: a fighter (from "Carbon Creek") and a small
cruiser (from "Fusion"). -- Moreover, Travis is welding two extractable wings on the dorsal side
of Enterprise's shuttlepod. However, I care for such attempts to make the shuttle look cooler about as much as Tuvok did in VOY:
"Extreme Risk". At least Travis had something to do. ;-)
Rating: 9
Kir'Shara
No date given: Soval and Tucker meet with Shran and tell him about the Vulcan
agenda. The Andorian commander does not believe that Soval would betray his
people. He kidnaps and tortures the Vulcan. But he recognizes that Soval was
telling the truth. Near the Vulcan capital the guards of the High Command locate
Archer, T'Pau and T'Pol. The latter falls into the hands of the guards one of
whom is Talok, a former subordinate who is willing to help her. Vulcan and
Andorian ships engage in a battle with Enterprise between the lines. Archer and
T'Pau present the Kir'Shara to the High Command, and they come just in time to
avert a worse conflict. V'Las is removed from his position, and an investigation
against him is initiated. A priest takes over Surak's katra. On Enterprise, Koss
tells T'Pol that their marriage is over now that her mother is dead. The ousted V'Las,
however, secretly meets with his ally - a Romulan!

After seeing "Awakening" and
enjoying really every second of it much like in "Countdown", I was a
bit afraid that the third part could become incoherent just like "Zero
Hour". But there is absolutely no comparison between these two, save the unexpected alien to appear at the end of
both episodes. No need to say I can much rather accept the Romulan. If there was ever
a perfect opportunity to show them and let them enter the game, it was here.
Still, it may already qualify as a Star Trek cliché that an unexpected guest
appears in the last second of an episode. Like before in "Awakening"
it was a pleasure to see how Trip deals with everything on his own, and how he
and Soval complement each other. And although I anticipated nothing less, the
ultimate revelation that all Vulcans can mind-meld reconciled me with that part
of Enterprise's history. It is good to know that sometimes authors and producers
listen to the fans or read their websites.
"Awakening" is a slight letdown although the high quality of writing
persists throughout the whole episode. But I felt the pace slowed down too much
during most of the time, with just too many filler scenes. The torturing of
Soval didn't strike me as particularly exciting. It was too harsh anyway,
although we know such violence isn't unusual for Andorians. Overall, the
Vulcan trilogy may have worked with a bit less action and violence anyway,
unlike the Augments arc. In addition, the continued stride through the desert
with occasional obstacles was a bit monotonous to watch. These two parts of the
story could have easily been shortened. This would have allowed to take more
time for the resolution. The way it was actually done, there was simply too much
happening or too much declared in just a couple of minutes (V'Las on trial,
Archer getting rid of Surak, humans no longer under surveillance, T'Pol's
marriage divorced, Romulans on Vulcan). I would still call it a worthy ending
but its hurriedness was somewhat disappointing.
While I was watching I already wondered why the Kir'Shara was supposed to have
such an enormous impact on the High Command. It is a record of Surak's original
teachings, that much is probably true and could be verified. On the other hand,
did the writings of Qumran lead to a re-evaluation of Christian teachings, and
even such a swift one? Would it have helped to show Lenin or Stalin a copy of
Karl Marx' writings to convince them that they are on a wrong path? This is the
somewhat naive part of the story, and as T'Pol correctly says, realistically it
would accomplish nothing. On a still different note, the Syrranites teach the
true way of Surak. But what is the true way anyway? Back to the roots,
abandoning technology? Forward to a decidedly cerebral or spiritual existence?
The true way needs a pragmatic component, one that takes into account the stage
of development and the overall conditions of a society. One that is democratic
and pluralist and not just another ideology. The "true way" as
proclaimed by the Syrranites may remain an isolated and transitory phenomenon
like the "Flower Power" movement or worse, it may become a similar fiasco
as imposing obsolete concepts like Communism on a modern industrial society.
Fortunately, as we can see in the 23rd and 24th centuries, Vulcan has been
successful in following the path of the Syrranites.
Nitpicking: What happened to humans not standing a chance against Vulcans on
Vulcan because of the thin air? Archer fought against the Vulcan soldiers as if
he were considerably stronger. Surak may have given him the knowledge how to
perform nerve pinches, but how could his katra recondition Archer's body to be
fit for Vulcan? -- Another thing that bugged me was the Kir'Shara itself.
Undeniably we've seen more outlandish artifacts, but I wonder why ancient
technology always has to be that sophisticated and why it always still works
after so many centuries.
Remarkable facts: Treason is one of the few crimes on Vulcan still punishable by
execution. -- As opposed to the assertions of the Vulcan High Command, every
Vulcan could learn mind melds. Likewise, Pa'nar is a curable disease that exists
since the days of Surak and is caused by melders who have been insufficiently
trained.
Rating: 7
Daedalus No date given:
Emory Erickson, the inventor of the transporter, and his daughter Danica are
going to perform an experiment on Enterprise with a new subquantum transporter
that could one day make starships dispensable. The ship enters the
"Barrens", a region devoid of stars where it is struck by a spatial
anomaly that kills one crew member. Trip becomes suspicious when he notices that
Erickson requires more energy than necessary for his experiment. Erickson has to
admit that his true goal is and always was to get back his son Quinn who had vanished
during a subquantum transporter test in the Barrens 15 years ago. Despite Trip's
anger and concerns about Erickson's unethical practices Archer allows the
scientist, who is an old friend of the family, to carry on. They retrieve Quinn,
but he dies on the transporter platform because of cellular decay, leaving
behind a father who is finally ready to live a normal life. In sickbay
Dr. Phlox is pleased to tell T'Pol that her Pa'nar syndrome has been cured.

"Daedalus" resumes seamlessly the recent trend of continuity-relevant episodes.
The Augments arc presented some new aspects without harming
continuity. The Vulcan arc even reconciled Enterprise with the rest of Trek
in an unprecedented fashion. I am not yet tired of this type of stories, I only would not have amassed them in just one season. Yet, Daedalus can't quite catch up
with the excitement about the aforementioned episodes, and this is not only because
the three-episode arcs naturally have a stronger impact. It is nice to learn
various trivia about the
development of the transporter and the man who accomplished it. But overall
the plot of "Daedalus" is too thin even for a single episode, at times I
would have been bored if I hadn't been busy writing down some technical
notes.
Almost everything that happens is quite predictable, considering that
we know many stories along the same lines. I notice only now how very common the
motive of a scientist obsessively trying to retrieve something he has lost
is in Star Trek. The most obvious equivalent to "Daedalus" is how Jake
Sisko underwent years of scientific education to rescue his father in DS9: "The
Visitor". Just like Annorax in VOY: "Year of Hell" played with the course of time to get back his beloved wife. We've also had
VOY: "Jetrel" with the Haakonian
scientist of the same name, who attempted to re-materialize the many Talaxians he
killed with the metreon cascade, and with exactly the same sad outcome as in
"Daedalus". And
finally Soran in "Generations", who struggled to get back into the
Nexus at any cost. All of these episodes are fine and are full of ethical
implications, and so is "Daedalus". But the surprising and new element is missing.
Other obvious parallels that spring to my mind are TOS: "The Tholian
Web", where captain Kirk vanishes into a parallel dimension, TNG:
"Relics" where Scotty survives in a transporter beam for 80 years,
TOS: "The Ultimate Computer" about a technology that utterly fails
just like the subquantum transporter and the same again with the soliton wave in
TNG:
"New Ground". It almost seems like "Daedalus" pillages all
kinds of Trek stereotypes about scientists and technology.
On the bright side, I liked the emotional touch that was in several aspects of
the episode. Certainly the strongest of them was Emory Erickson's love for his
son (and Danica's for her brother). I think this part of the episode is beyond
criticism, it was skillfully written and profited from fine acting. I think it
proved right to center the story around Erickson, giving him not only more lines
than usual guest characters but also showing the events to some extent from his
perspective. Well,
elderly people in wheelchairs are always good for moving moments, but I don't
think something like that is as easy to play as it seems. Emotions also
determined Archer's decision to let Erickson, his father's old friend, carry on with his
experiments. It is clear that if it were any other scientist, the good captain
would open the next airlock to kick him off the ship. Trip knows that,
and this only corroborates his resistance against the captain's orders. Well,
maybe the safety fanatic Reed would have made a still better opponent in this regard
(moreover, the crewman died before his eyes), but then again Trip is
the multifarious character (and played by my favorite actor of the show). Could
it be that the writers are even trying to build up a lasting conflict between
the captain and the chief engineer? Shouldn't it have consequences that Archer
acted against the interest of the ship and crew? The interaction between Trip
and T'Pol, on the other hand, didn't strike me as particularly interesting in
"Daedalus". I had the impression that it largely consisted of hollow phrases,
but that may be because it amounted to just a couple of minutes altogether.
On the other hand, it may have been just the right way to pick up the recent
events on Vulcan that must have had some sort of effect on T'Pol.
Naturally the episode is quite full of scientific and technical references. The
most remarkable of them comes from Erickson, who mentions that there was a
metaphysical discussion about the transporter and whether a beamed person would
be still the same or just some "weird copy". To my knowledge
this issue has not been explicitly tackled on Star Trek do far, and I would have wished to hear more
about it. It may have made a great plot idea to let a court or parliament on
Earth outlaw the transporter because of exactly these concerns, and the
Enterprise crew would need to prove that it's safe and that they are not just
"copies". -- We also learn that the concept of subquantum
teleportation that Emory Erickson was allegedly pushing to replace starships
"in a few decades" was flawed and wouldn't work in 1000 years
according to Erickson. Fortunately, because otherwise we would be left with yet
another technology that is completely abandoned or forgotten although it has at
most a few bugs or security risks. In this respect it was only a bad idea to
have Quinn materialize in an outwardly good shape. Indeed the fact that someone
almost survives in whatever realm Quinn was for 15 years indicates that with
some more work on the concept it could be made safe. Even if it wouldn't have
given Erickson the opportunity to say good-bye to his son, it would have been
much more believable to leave Quinn behind in the Barrens or even beam him back
as something that "didn't live for long - fortunately", as
cruel as this may sound. -- I noticed that there were no stars visible inside
the Barrens. But a good deal of the stars that can be seen in the night sky from
Earth are more than 100 light-years away, so the region can't be that dark.
Remarkable quote: "I have lost someone close. And I'd do almost anything to get her back, except put other people in danger."
(Trip, to Erickson)
Remarkable facts: The Barrens are a region of space with "not a star
system within a hundred light-years" (not clear whether it's the radius
or diameter). This is explained by Erickson as the effect of a "subspace
node, a bubble of curved space-time". -- Erickson achieves a
transporter range of 40,000 kilometers, which is a record at the time. --
Enterprise's armory is on F-deck.
Crew losses: 1
Rating: 5
Observer Effect
No date given: Hoshi and Trip return from an alien planet with a contagious and
incurable infection with a silicon-based virus. Their reactions and those of the
rest of the crew are being observed by two non-corporeal Organians, as they have
been doing it for hundreds of years with many different species. They may switch
from one humanoid body to another for that purpose. What surprises them is how
much compassion the humans show and that Archer is willing to sacrifice himself
in order to save every single one of his crew. When Hoshi and Trip have died,
the two Organians reveal themselves to the dying Archer, and one of them vows to
save the crew and to break their long-standing rule not to interfere with the
observed species.

I was not particularly impressed with this
variant of the old "lab rat" theme where highly advanced alien species
are observing human behavior. At least "Observer Effect" turned out a
tad more original than the blend of TNG: "Power Play", VOY:
"Scientific Method" and ENT: "The Crossing" that I was
expecting.
On the bright side, the new episode was pleasantly devoid of
unnecessary action or distracting sub-plots, and it convinced with good
performances especially of Connor Trinneer and John Billingsley. I liked the
teaser with Reed and Mayweather as chess geniuses, although it took less than 30
seconds to recognize that these were not actually the two officers whom we would
least expect to play chess but actually yet another couple of aliens possessing
the bodies of Starfleet personnel. I also think that the reference to the
Organians of TOS: "Errand of Mercy" was just the right idea to avoid
having too many different non-corporeal entities floating around in our galaxy
(and to avert an untimely appearance of Q, which would have ruined everything).
On the downside, the outcome was all too predictable. Since the Talosians in
"The Cage" we have seen so many times that imagination, intuition or
compassion prevails over the bureaucracy, technocracy or other stubbornness of a
highly developed species. We have to wonder how they all could ever evolve so
far without these human virtues. Ironically the Organians of TOS as well as the
very similar Metrons of TOS: "Arena" were still giving humanity a
lesson in ethics more than 100 years later. But on most occasions in Trek it was
just the other way round. In this regard "Observer Effect" may have
been meant to elucidate what is so special about humanity that this species,
although they are neither the strongest nor the smartest, would become
predominant in the known universe, at least among the humanoid races. The
Organians reward human compassion and sacrifice and they listen to the words of
the "primitive" Captain Archer, but I can't imagine that no other species
has ever attempted the same. There is just too much diversity in the Star Trek
Universe for humans to be located at the very upper end of an ethical scale. It
is a contrived and arrogant twist that the superior Organians are so impressed
only with humans that they would instantly revise long-standing policies for them,
as flawed as these may always have been.
Something particularly annoying, however, is how Archer defends the yet to be
named Prime Directive that he swiftly made up in the ethically appalling episode
ENT: "Dear Doctor". He makes good points in "Observer
Effect", and it's honorable how he struggles for his and for Hoshi's and
Trip's lives while acknowledging that the Organians are beyond his
comprehension. But he should not explain to the Organians but to the Valakians
why two starship officers, who have chosen to go on dangerous missions, are to be
saved, whereas a whole species is doomed just because of their "bad
genes".
One more thing to remember is how two underused characters, namely Hoshi and
Travis, were brought into play. This is laudable in the first place as far as
the actors are concerned, but it's not exactly the right occasion to use them
just when they would act out of character. The real Mayweather doesn't have a
single line, and we really have to wonder what Judith and Garfield Reeves-Stevens
were thinking when they decided to turn Hoshi into a secret gambler, who (albeit
by accident) breaks the arm of her commanding officer. I think that giving a too
amiable character a "dark past" is a rather cheap way to make him or
her more faceted, and it is a poor excuse for not involving the character more
into live action.
Remarkable quote: "I remember Exobiology 101, Captain. Humans are carbon-based. Our immune system can't fight silicon." (Trip, to Archer)
Remarkable facts: The Organians have been observing the Klingons and the
Cardassians before dealing with the virus infection. They both chose to kill
their ill landing parties. The only difference was in how fast they came to that
decision. -- Starfleet now seems to be using their own designation "Class
M" instead of Minshara class for inhabitable planets. -- The quarantine
station is located on D-deck.
Rating: 4
Babel One
November 12, 2154: Enterprise is ferrying a Tellarite delegation with Ambassador
Gral to peace talks with the Andorians on Babel. On their way through Andorian
space Archer picks up Shran and 19 survivors of his cruiser, which has been
destroyed by the Tellarites, as Shran alleges. Soon Enterprise is attacked too,
by what seems to be an Andorian cruiser. But T'Pol finds out that actually the
two attacking vessels are one and the same, as is evidenced by the power
signature that was identical in both cases. When the ship is found, no one is
aware yet that they are dealing with a Romulan prototype vessel. A landing party
beams over, but Trip and Malcolm are trapped there after the Romulans have
disabled Enterprise's transporter. Meanwhile on Enterprise, Shran and Talas
escape from their quarters to interrogate the Tellarites. Archer is just about
to deescalate the situation when Talas and one Tellarite are wounded. On
Romulus, it is discovered that Trip and Malcolm have found the bridge of the
remote-controlled vessel...

The new three-episode mini-arc started with a promising yet
not entirely captivating episode. I liked how the established races and their
mutual hostilities were brought into play here, without harming continuity.
Everything revolved around the genuine and quite intelligent idea of a disguised
mystery ship that was meant to trigger interstellar conflicts. The plot bore some surprises, the most obvious being the appearance of the Romulans
(although they had to be physically absent as a continuity requirement). I think
it was a fine homage to TOS: "Journey to Babel" to show a similar
diplomatic conflict on Enterprise too, with the mention of "Babel"
being more than just casual name-dropping. On the other hand, this type of
stories has been overdone on Enterprise. Archer is playing the mediator almost
every time he meets the Vulcans, Andorians, Klingons or Xindi and preferably
more than one of them at once. It's certainly a nice trait and it befits the
idea of Star Trek, but at some point the repeated attempts to make him a
"22nd century Picard" become boring. Maybe this time has come
now.
Speaking of clichés, some of them appeared in a different light in this episode.
A frequent motive in Trek is that coincidentally one of your opponents is on your bridge, and he will
help you defeat one of his ships by pointing out a weak spot. To my
amusement this time it didn't succeed, and I wonder if this was purposely
conceived as a parody of the cliché. Another thing that didn't work quite as
usual was the seductive woman who distracted the guard to escape from the prison.
The guy was fortunate enough not really to fall for the trick. He managed to
knock down Shran and put up a good fight against Talas until she could disable him. What
I almost liked most about the episode was the teaser with Archer and Hoshi
rehearsing for their encounter with the Tellarites, who are known for getting into arguments
about each and everything. It is always nice if she is allowed to say more than
a just occasional lines, and it was really funny.
My principal complaint pertaining to the episode's technology is that the Tellarites would
have deserved a new ship and not one of the Arkonians and Xindi-Arboreals to
none of which their design may be related. The same goes for the Romulan
prototype vessel which is essentially the "Flea ship" from VOY:
"The Fight" and looks nothing like a Romulan design. Something that
bothered me too is that it would be impossible to control a ship in real time
across many light-years (it was mentioned in the episode that it was far outside
their territory). Finally, the Romulan city is akin to the one from
"Nemesis" but not like the one from TNG and DS9. Still, rather than
assuming they are moving their capital forth and back, I am content with the
explanation that not everything has to be located in their capital. On a side
note note, many of the scenes inside the Romulan drone were filmed with an
extreme wide-angle lens. This may have had technical reasons, but most of all it
created a creepy claustrophobic atmosphere like rarely before in the series.
Remarkable quote: "There's no rule that says the bridge has to be on top
of the ship." (Malcolm)
Remarkable facts: The Kumari was the first ship of her class. She had a
complement of 86 of which 19 survived the Romulan attack. -- The Andorians and
Tellarites have been feuding for over a century. -- Tellarites regard canines as
a delicacy.
Rating: 7
United No
date given: Trip and Malcolm disable the warp drive of the Romulan drone. When
the Romulans threaten to let Trip die, who is stuck in a radiation-poisoned
service channel, Malcolm agrees to restore the propulsion system, but only to
damage the ship considerably by overloading his phase pistol. Meanwhile on
Enterprise, Archer and T'Pol devise a plan to hunt down the enemy vessel,
but this would require humans, Vulcans, Andorians and Tellarites to cooperate.
The alliance is about to fall apart before it can be forged when Talas dies of
her injuries. Shran demands revenge, and because he would likely kill his
Tellarite opponent in the ritual duel with saw-toothed ice miner tools, Archer
steps in as a substitute. Shran nonetheless allows the fight to ensue, but it
is over when Archer cuts off one of Shran's antennae. The Romulans have regained
control of their drone thanks to its self-repair technology, and Reed and Trip
are struggling to get to the hull to be beamed out. They escape from a hatch
just before the ship goes to warp. The drone makes it back to Romulus where the
pilot is disconnected from his remote control interface. He is an Andorian.

"United" was an extraordinarily intelligent and technically almost flawless thriller from the
first to almost the last second. Only the "Previously on Star Trek
Enterprise" trailer was a bit lacking, as it failed to really summarize what
had happened last week. Aside from this minor deficiency the episode rather benefited than suffered from being
the second of three parts, like already "Cold Station 12" and
"Awakening" earlier this season. This may have been the reason for the
very fast pace of "United". What will be remembered most is the
spectacular action, like Trip's and Malcolm's fight against the
remote-controlled drone, the duel between Shran and Archer or the CGI attacks of
the Romulan drone. Still, there was enough time for a good deal of nice character interaction, like between Archer and an unusually compassionate
T'Pol when the captain was mentally preparing for the duel. Most notably Jeffrey
Combs as Shran gave a marvelous Jekyll and Hyde performance throughout the episode that horrified his friend
Archer. And even Hoshi and Travis, as already in the two preceding episodes, were
conceded a real part in the story. At long last the authors seem to have learned
that it doesn't always have to be Archer, T'Pol, Trip or Phlox who come up with
ideas (although I wonder why the two didn't spot earlier the paragraph in the
Andorian ritual that would
allow to end the fight when one contender is disabled).
Just as already “Babel One”, this week's episode made very skillful use of historical references
instead of simply rehashing them with different actors. I am thinking of
one-dimensional stories like "Oasis", "Judgment" or "Regeneration"
earlier in the series, to
which there is no comparison. Clearly the fight between Archer and his friend
Shran was a tip of the hat to TOS: "Amok Time", while the loss of
Shran's antenna can be seen as an ironical reference to TOS: "Journey to
Babel" where we saw the antenna of a phony Andorian break off. Likewise,
several well-known clichés were either avoided or given a new twist. I'm
thinking of Talas' death which came more or less unexpected and off screen, not
giving her the chance to utter her famous last words, something that I always
see as very contrived. Or the scene in which
Shran came in to talk about Talas and then challenge the Tellarite murderer,
during which it was never really clear whether he would rather pull a knife and kill the guy
or offer him a drink to bury their conflict. However, the idea of a sensor grid
formed by many ships reminded me a tad too much of TNG: "Redemption"
(even more because of the Romulan involvement).
Fortunately the sensor grid was not such an important concept here as in the TNG
episode, although tying more fleet operations into the story would have
emphasized the idea that an alliance was being forged. The only slight annoyance
of "United" was the pale-skinned Andorian as the pilot of the RC ship.
It was clearly an interesting twist that will be explained later, but as a
cliffhanger it leaves a bad taste, just due to its similarity to the shock about
the pale alien Nazi in "Zero Hour".
Like in "Babel One", the camera movements were fantastic once again.
Above all I recollect the scene when Shran rushes to sickbay, with the camera
pursuing him. Then, without a cut, it moves to Archer's and Phlox' faces to turn
back to Shran and around him while he is screaming "Nooo!".
That's what I call perfection. And the CGI sequences with the "camera"
following the extremely maneuverable Romulan probe were superb too (if only they
had built a new model).
Remarkable quote: "You're good at building things, I'm good at blowing them up."
(Malcolm)
Remarkable fact: The Kumari, Shran's ship, was named for the first ice cutter to
circumnavigate Andoria. -- We see two Remans, for the first time in Star Trek besides
"Nemesis".
Rating: 9
The Aenar No
date given: An analysis of the Romulan pilot's brain pattern shows that he is an
Aenar - a member of a telepathic Andorian subspecies whose existence was
discovered only 50 years ago. Shran and Archer visit the secret Aenar city on
Andoria where they hope to find the solution to the puzzle. The pacifist Aenar
refuse to cooperate - except for Jhamel, the sister of the pilot whose name is
Gareb and who vanished some time ago. After T'Pol has attempted in vain to
operate a replica of the so-called telepresence unit that allows to control the
Romulan drones, Jhamel succeeds. When two drones are attacking Enterprise, she
manages to telepathically contact her brother on Romulus and tell him to end the attack. He is
killed by the Romulan Admiral, but it is too late. One of the drones destroys
the other one, and Enterprise eliminates the remaining vessel.

I see "The Aenar" as a bit of a disappointment. One reason
is that the principal puzzle of the Romulan marauder had been solved in
"United", as had been the conflict between Shran and the Tellarites. There
was essentially nothing left to do in the final part of the trilogy but to hunt
down the drones, a task which didn't strike me as thrilling. It was done almost casually
if it had not been for the Aenar siblings who saved the episode from becoming
boring. The two were not even particularly strong guest characters. Jhamel's
interest for Shran remained at the surface (although I liked their scene in the
dark, in the Aeanar city), and Gareb had to remain passive anyway the whole
time. Getting rid of them was effortless. Gareb was simply shot by the Romulan
admiral, and an unadorned farewell to the sympathetic Jhamel was deemed
sufficient. Introducing two new characters and a whole new species was not a brilliant idea
anyway as far as the whole trilogy is concerned, but at
least it gave "The Aenar" some distinctiveness.
The exploration of the motives of the two Romulans (the scientist and the
admiral), who had not really been personally involved in the trilogy so far, should be seen in the same
light.
In spite of everything, I am still surprised how little happened in the 42
minutes of this episode, compared to last week's "United" that was so
full of action and drama that it seemed to last twice as long. Obviously more
time for character development was left here, which found use in some interaction
between Archer and Shran as well as between Trip and T'Pol. Trip expressed his
concerns that T'Pol was going to try out the telepresence unit, and once again
he proved to be bad in explaining that it was out of personal interest and not
just because she was a valuable officer.
What I missed too was an interesting revelation in the end, something that would
have shed a new light on the Andorians or maybe on the Romulans. Considering
that it was the end of the trilogy I am not thinking of yet another cliffhanger,
but rather of something to justify a follow-up at a later date (assuming that
the decision to cancel the series had not yet been made when the episode was
being produced). In any case Tucker's talk with Archer about a possible transfer
to the Columbia was a rather poor ending of a great arc. One more point of
criticism is that the parallels to motives in "The Forge" are so
striking that they seem to come from an automatic plot generator. Just replace
the Vulcan Forge with the Andorian ice desert, the electromagnetic storms with a
dampening field, the secretive Syranites with the secretive Aenar. It's
essentially the same story.
Remarkable facts: The Aenar were discovered by the Andorians only some 50 years
ago. There are supposed to be just a few thousand left. -- The Ticonderoga, a
cargo vessel, seems to be another victim of the Romulan marauder.
Rating: 6
Affliction
November 27th, 2154: Enterprise arrives at Earth to attend the launch of its
sister ship Columbia. Trip joins the crew of Columbia. In San Francisco Dr.
Phlox is kidnapped and taken to a Klingon colony to find a cure against a virus
that is spreading through the Klingon Empire and may cost the lives of millions.
The crew of Enterprise figures out that the Rigelians are responsible for
abducting Phlox, but the Rigelian freighter is found destroyed in space. Archer
discovers that Malcolm Reed has obstructed the investigation by erasing the data
in the Rigelian black box. He confines his armory officer, who is secretly
working for a man named Harris of Section 31, to the brig. Enterprise is attacked
by a Klingon vessel and is boarded. One of the intruders can be disabled by the
MACOs and is taken to sickbay - he looks almost human, although his lifesigns are
Klingon. As Dr. Phlox is told, the reason for the virus to become dangerous was
that it combined with human DNA - more precisely with DNA of Augments that the
Klingons were experimenting with to create stronger warriors. One side effect is
that the Klingon Augments take over the characteristic smooth foreheads of humans.
On Enterprise, it is found that the intruders have sabotaged the propulsion
system. Because of an open antimatter regulator the ship has to stay at high
warp...

The obsession to explain each and everything
in the Trek Universe in this fourth season has hit its peak. Hardly any serious
Trek fan would have asked for a solution to the infamous Klingon forehead
dilemma on screen, knowing that there used to be the convenient and strikingly
simple answer that they were always supposed to look like they do since the
first feature film, in accordance with what Roddenberry had in mind. Pondering
about the foreheads was fun though, although it has gained a fanboyish
aftertaste, considering that casual viewers frequently came up with all
kinds of far-out theories without caring about the facts. We can be glad that
the small story arc explains away the problem in a quite elegant and mostly
intelligent fashion to everyone's satisfaction. And at least I am glad that the
frequent mails along the lines "Didn't you know that they were surgically
altered to infiltrate the Federation" will stop. Addendum: They didn't
stop completely. People still promote their own takes occasionally.
I didn't like Tucker in this episode and his interaction with T'Pol (or rather
the lack thereof). Why is the chief engineer suddenly so secretive and abrasive as
if he were a totally different character? His complicated relationship with
T'Pol can't be the only reason. In any case we have probably never seen a
character on Star Trek, who did such a bad job separating his personal affairs
from his profession and duty. I'm not particularly fond of such sub-plots
anyway. It went awry in TNG: "Lessons", and it didn't work here
either. And the dream sequence with T'Pol and Trip meeting in a white realm was
awful and clearly expendable, unless this new telepathic link will play a major
role in upcoming episodes. This raises the question why and how Trip will return
to Enterprise. It seems like he is coming back just as suddenly and inexplicably
as he left.
I wasn't really fond of the Reed-Section 31 connection either. Revealing that
the armory officer was working for that organization behind Archer's back may
have been good for a couple of stories still to come (if the series had not been
discontinued). But essentially we have already seen something like that with
Bashir on DS9. The story of "Affliction" would have worked without
involving Section 31 and definitely without mentioning them, and as we will see
in the follow-up Malcolm will resume his position sooner than we might think and
than he might have deserved, bearing in mind the subversion he is guilty of. On a positive note, Reed is involved
in a real conflict with another character for the first time in the series.
Hoshi was given two nice scenes, when she defended herself using some Aikido (at
least that's what she had mentioned before, I don't know the difference between
Aikido and other martial arts) and when T'Pol performed her first mind meld with
her, revisiting the scene of the kidnapping. Aside from Section 31 there was a
lot more name-dropping in the episode, including references to the Orions,
Mazarites, Tiburon, Levodian flu and metagenic research. It may have been
reduced, but for the most part it created useful consistency.
As T'Pol said, the Columbia is virtually identical to Enterprise. Her larger
deflector dish is the only significant difference, at least from the outside.
But inside the ship there is the one thing I loathe about the Columbia: the
flashing light columns on the bridge where they don't serve any obvious purpose
and are just a pain in the neck of Captain Hernandez. Sure, the light columns
are a way to establish the perhaps necessary visual difference between the two
bridges. But the way they were fabricated they look like an immature fanboyish
feature.
Remarkable fact: Enterprise can be pushed up to Warp 5.2, although this speed
(obviously above "maximum warp" that Archer had already ordered
earlier) can't be maintained for long.
Rating: 6
Divergence No date given: In a daring maneuver Trip is transferred from Columbia to
Enterprise, where he averts the disaster by performing a cold start of the warp
reactor while Columbia is maintaining the warp field. While the Klingon fleet
under the command of Fleet Admiral Krell is approaching to eradicate the
infected colony, Phlox is struggling to devise a cure for the viral infection,
supported by the Klingon scientist Antaak. When they find a remedy that would
actually take away the superior abilities from the Klingon Augments, they decide
not to tell General K'Vagh, who oversees their work. With little time left until
the fleet arrives, the last four healthy Klingons agree to test four different
strains of the antivirus that Phlox has developed, of which three are lethal and
only one provides a cure. Time ultimately runs out when the Klingons attack and
Enterprise and Columbia are being fired on too, against Krell's agreement with
Section 31. Archer beams down and allows Phlox to inject the antivirus in his
body to speed up the procedure. Then Antaak beams the virus into the Klingon
lead ship, forcing Krell and his men to stand down to be healed. The cured
Klingons retain their flat foreheads and are said to pass them on to their
children.

"Divergence" had some of the best action in the whole
series, along with a mostly well thought-out story. Trip's stunt to get from
Columbia to Enterprise was the probably most memorable part of
"Divergence". Reed quite correctly stated that using the transporter
at warp wouldn't be possible. Here we have at least one limit of this technology
compared to the 24th century, where we have occasionally seen beaming at warp.
The principle of merging the warp fields of the two ships was quite correctly
explained and shown on screen. The only point of slight criticism is that it was
not considered an option using a shuttlepod for the transfer. The whole maneuver
was exciting and visually spectacular too. And it ultimately answers the
questions why the ventral side of the NX class is so flat and how the design of
the Prometheus came to life. ;-) On a related note, obviously the Klingons could
beam through even two shields when they transported the canister with the virus
to the lead ship of the attacking fleet.
But something illogical keeps bugging me: Wasn't the reason for the hassle in
"Affliction" that the antimatter flow regulators couldn't be closed?
In other words, the produced power would blow the warp core if the plasma didn't
all go into the propulsion system. That's why Archer ordered Mayweather to go to
maximum warp and later even in excess of that (Warp 5.2). Conversely, Tucker now
insists that the reactor needs to be shut down and restarted after removing the
virus while still at warp. As we can witness, after shutting down the reactor
the warp field grille goes off almost immediately, meaning that no plasma is
flowing through it any longer. If the antimatter regulators automatically go
offline too, anything is fine. But in this case it wouldn't have needed Tucker
to accomplish that and there would have been no hurry to restart the reactor.
Moreover, the warp core, especially when no plasma is flowing anyway, doesn't
care whether a starship is at warp or not. If, however, the regulators were
independent of the rest of the reactor or couldn't be closed because of the
Klingon tampering (that's how it sounded like in "Affliction"), the
ship would be destroyed in a huge matter-antimatter explosion the very instant
the reactor goes offline. In either case the situation as shown in
"Divergence" is inconsistent with "Affliction". Maybe, while
overall the continuity between the two episodes was fine, this important
technical concept didn't quite make the transition from one writer team (Coto
& Sussman) to the other (Reeves-Stevens).
It was an interesting twist, albeit not quite realistic, that Phlox had four
strains of the virus and four healthy Klingons left. Perhaps it would have had
more impact if Phlox had faced this decision earlier though, with the prospect
of one by one of them dying. Another remarkable aspect of the episode was the
conflict between the different castes of the Klingon Empire. The motivation of
the biologist Antaak reminded me a lot of the scientist in TNG:
"Suspicions", as well as of the lawyer in ENT: "Judgment".
All of them have in common that they are struggling against a lot of prejudices
of the warriors. The interaction between Phlox and both Klingons worked out
quite well anyway. Especially after the immediate threat of being executed was
taken away from Phlox their discussions greatly contributed to the story. It was
only an overly unlikely coincidence that of all Klingons the son of General
K'Vagh was captured on Enterprise, especially since he only briefly met his
father toward the end. The rest of the character interaction was rather
uninspiring. The conversation between Reed and the Klingon in the neighboring
cell was dull for the most part, and the whole Section 31 sub-plot captured
least of all my interest. I can hardly imagine how Section 31 could become so
powerful considering as how naive and toothless Harris presents himself. Trip
and T'Pol once again avoided using plain language, with Trip continuing to act
out of character (and Connor Trinneer falling short of his talent). I only liked
the ironic detail that T'Pol at one point questioned Trip about his dreams the
same way normally humans would like to know trivial things from Vulcans.
Something that angered me a bit was that ridges formed on Archer's forehead
during the treatment, and that this happened quite suddenly. So does Archer grow
new bones (after all it must be bones that are responsible for the Klingon look)
in a matter of seconds? We may buy that the virus alters the DNA as on many
other occasions in Trek, but showing impossible transformations just for the
sake of a visual effect is something the series could easily do without. While
the overall treatment of the forehead dilemma was quite skilled like already in
"Affliction", I disliked a couple of side notes that were rather
contrived. For instance, when Antaak came to Phlox with a proposal for a cure,
Phlox said after a quick glance that it would go along with "some minor
changes in their appearance" as if it was meant as a broad hint for
those who still didn't know that everything was about the famous Klingon
forehead mutation. The remark that the children of the cured Klingons would
inherit their smooth foreheads was necessary though, while we may want to forget
about Phlox' idea that cranial reconstruction would likely become popular (Kor
anyone?).
Remarkable joke: The label on the wall between Reed's and the Klingon's cells
reads "No entry". As if the prisoners wouldn't know that. ;-)
Rating: 7
Bound December 27th, 2154: After forging a deal with the Orion trader
Harrad-Sar,
Archer and Reed receive three beautiful slave women as a gift. The three women,
Navaar, D'Nesh and Marras, have a disruptive influence on the crew. They begin
to seduce the men up to the point of mind control, while women are suffering
from headaches. Dr. Phlox finds out that pheromones are responsible for the
effect. Only Tucker and T'Pol are immune because a bond has formed between them.
When the three Orion women have taken over the bridge and Harrad-Sar arrives to
tow away Enterprise as his booty, it turns out that he is under their control as
well. Tucker rectifies the situation with a phase pistol. When T'Pol asks Trip
to stay aboard, he says that he has already applied for his transfer back to
Enterprise.

"Bound in honor" is not what I would call that. As a
matter of fact, I don't recall any modern Trek episode with such outspoken
sexism. Well, it was hilarious up to some point to see an almost authentic TOS
drama along the lines of "Mudd's Women" or "Elaan
of Troyius" in a technically and artistically enhanced version, as I
have to concede. Also, I liked the look and the movements of the Orion girls. I
definitely prefer the sight of their scanty costumes (like William Ware Theiss
made them for TOS) over the bashful hints of hedonism during TNG ("The
Outrageous Okona" being the prime example) or Enterprise's peep shows
with contrived naked breasts & bums ("Harbinger").
Still, "Bound" didn't belong in our time, no matter what efforts were
taken to update it. It didn't help either that in the outcome the Orion men
turned out to be the actual slaves. This ironical twist was too late and too
trivial to change anything. Essentially it just made possible T'Pol's joke or
whatever it was supposed to be about the Orion women in charge - the one good
thing about an otherwise disagreeable species according to her. I sort of liked
the joke though because it was at least one fitting TOS homage (reminding us of
Spock's closing words in many TOS episodes).
The explanation that the girls are not the slaves makes me wonder anyway why
they permit themselves to be showcased on slave markets like we have seen one
only recently in "Borderland". Something doesn't work with the
explanation, but this is just one problem in an episode that didn't work on the
whole. The plot has several holes, but even this shortcoming is surpassed by the
general feeling of helplessness among the crew. We have seen so many alien
takeovers before in the series and so many situations with the crew on edge, but
none of them made Archer, Reed and the others look as dull as in
"Bound". So dull that at some point I denied them my sympathy because
it was only annoying to see them stumble around, recognize the danger, and then
do nothing against it. For the same reason I already utterly disliked "A
Night in Sickbay" and "Harbinger".
I haven't figured out yet what part Tucker's rival Kelby was supposed to play
except for a scapegoat, because he got laid by one of the women, while Archer
and Reed were not (or at least not that we are supposed to know of). It is a
major annoyance of the episode that it preserves our heroes' clean records at any
rate. In TOS Kelby would have been killed in the course of the episode. Here he
gets beaten up and then vanishes somewhere in sickbay or in the brig or
elsewhere, which is just as sorry.
Long-time fans know and appreciate Manny Coto's efforts to fill in every gap he
can find in the TOS Universe and to tie TOS and ENT closer together in each
single episode than was attempted in the whole previous three seasons combined.
Now he has finally gone over the top. The plot of "Bound" is rather a
farcical re-enactment of TOS than a homage. The screenplay is full of the
clichés, like the lacking security on the ship, T'Pol's immunity because of her
Vulcan physiology and even the trick of sending some pulse back through the
grappler rope to disable it (the latter rather from Voyager). And as we would
not have expected otherwise, Dr. Phlox presents us the precise cause of the
whole trouble: It's not a mystery like it will obviously be 100 years later
("The Cage"). No, Orion women are irresistible because of their
pheromones. Or maybe midichlorians? Sorry, at some point the fans don't want to have each and everything explained.
There is one scene I enjoyed though that I would like to mention. When the ship
arrives at the planet and Archer is intoxicated with the pheromones, the camera
does a great job to show his dizziness. We can see some pans in unusual
directions, like from the side wall to the screen.
Remarkable dialogue: T'Pol: "At least we've learned something about the
Orions." - Malcolm: "Yeah, the women are in charge." -
T'Pol: "It proves that even the most disagreeable species have some
positive attributes."
Remarkable error: Tucker calls Kelby "lieutenant", but Kelby is
wearing the same commander pips as Tucker.
Remarkable mentions: Berengaria
is a potential site of a starbase. It was surveyed by the Vulcans over 50 years
ago and is said to be inhabited by flying reptiles, some reportedly over 200 meters
long. ;-) This legend is a homage to TOS: "This Side of the Paradise".
-- When Travis was 15, he met some irresistible Deltan women when his
father picked them up from their defunct ship.
Rating: 2
In a Mirror, Darkly
I/II January 13th, 2155: In the brutal Terran Empire of the Mirror
Universe, Commander Archer of the ISS Enterprise mutinies against Captain
Forrest. His goal is to take the ship to Tholian space where reportedly an
advanced vessel is in the hands of the hostile non-humanoid species. A captured
Tholian reveals the location of the secret facility when Archer and Phlox apply
torture. Not before long Commander T'Pol helps Forrest to regain command. But
Archer has locked the helm with an encryption code and Starfleet command
approves of Archer's mission. The crew find the USS Defiant NCC-1764 ready to
launch in a drydock. Archer and a small team beam over and seize command of the
Federation Starfleet vessel from the future that was lured into an interspatial
rift by the Mirror Tholians. Alarmed by a distress call of the prisoner,
Enterprise is soon surrounded by Tholian vessels and destroyed. Forrest dies on
the ship, while the Defiant manages to recover a number of escape pods. A Gorn,
who was still aboard the Defiant, sabotages the ship but Archer hunts down the
reptilian. With a vessel more powerful than any other at his avail he breaks
down a rebellion of other species against the Empire, including the Vulcans,
Andorians and Tellarites. After a disagreement Archer kills Admiral Black. In
the meantime T'Pol, Soval of the ISS Avenger and Phlox have forged an
alliance against Archer. The Defiant heads for Earth where Archer is going to
declare himself the new Emperor. But his mistress Hoshi Sato has poisoned his
champagne. In Earth's orbit she introduces herself as Empress to the puzzled
Starfleet Command...

I'm glad this double feature wound up rather
as appealing than as appalling. An overkill of cruelty and
silliness almost ruined the huge fun of seeing the crew in the colorful
TOS uniforms and having a fantastic CGI Defiant perform all the action that was
sadly missing in TOS. I thoroughly enjoyed "In a Mirror, Darkly" as solid entertainment, but
not without looking back at it with some grievances. To start with, the story and
the characters were utter pulp and would usually score close to zero points in
my review. While the reason for that lies in the simplistic nature of the Mirror
Universe and is not primarily the fault of the writer, I would still have
expected at least a minimum of characterization. What little was done to
elucidate the motives of the Mirror crew was rather contrived -- worst of all
the voice in Archer's head, which manifested itself as another Archer standing at
his side. A very cheap quirk. Yet, although it turned out anything but light-hearted, this is
also the
reason why I can see it to some degree as a parody, which I genuinely enjoyed
like most of the previous Mirror Universe installments. The multitude of
tongue-in-cheek references, with kind regards from Manny Coto, clearly helped me
to take a few things easy that would
otherwise have bothered me. Still the story and its very concept was lacking in
several respects.
The Mirror Universe has always been enticing as a "what if"
scenario. But some questions that we might pose (or are expected to pose) would
better remain unanswered. Do we really want to see our characters as tyrannical,
faithless and overall inhumane jerks? Does it need a dark nightmare of the future to
corroborate how bright the "true" vision of Star Trek is? While the
basic idea of an antithetic version of the Federation was a fascinating new
concept in TOS: "Mirror, Mirror", the Mirror Universe has gradually
lost its impact in the DS9 features that followed 30 years later. DS9:
"Through the Looking Glass" was still rather frightening in a positive
sense, as it showed humans as the victims of their own former primacy. The way
the Mirror Universe was treated in DS9: "Shattered Mirror" and
ultimately in "The Emperor's New Cloak", however, it had degraded to
an effortless concept of bringing excessive viciousness, comical relief and all
kinds of weirdness into an otherwise rather composed TV show. This was possible
because the Mirror Universe showed up only once in a while, so it wasn't required
to explain too much in terms of continuity. Characters could be killed off at whim and the balance of power considerably shifted on each occasion.
Everyone and everything
is disposable, who cares? All this happened with few to no impact on the characters and the general
setting of "our" universe. In this regard the concept of the Mirror
Universe has a built-in reset button like other, related motives, such as
alternate futures or holodeck programs. My concern is not primarily that the
Mirror Universe is unrealistic or that the evilness of their Mirror versions
could rub off on our characters. It rather lies in the function of the Mirror
Universe as a dumping ground for all kinds of ideas that are unthinkable in our
universe or, in other words, in normal "serious" Star Trek installments.
I would even go as far as calling the whole approach that was taken in the
Mirror Universe episodes hypocritical and discriminating. It is a place where nearly all characters are torturing, murdering, betraying one another
all the time. There exists not much variation of this basic pattern of behavior. It is
anything but plausible that a world could work like this and in terms of
narrative quality such a setting is prone to produce pulp. Moreover, it
makes anything in our universe look good - even the most ruthless Klingon is a
nice guy compared to the average Mirror character. The probably most hypocritical
aspect ever brought up in the Mirror Universe was the "lesbian fetish"
of DS9 (Kira, Leeta). No character in our Trek universe has ever been explicitly
shown as homosexual, but in the Mirror Universe exactly this happened
repeatedly and
overtly. Keeping in mind what the characters in the Mirror Universe are like,
the episodes seem to make up a correlation between homosexuality and criminal
predisposition! If there should ever be a gay or lesbian character again, we can
only hope that it will be done in a decent and not such a defamatory fashion.
Fortunately there was no such failing in "In a Mirror, Darkly".
But the way "straight" sexuality was shown was not really
better.
While it is bound to largely the same problems as other Mirror Universe stories
before, there is something exceptional about "In a Mirror, Darkly". The
episode entirely takes place in the Mirror Episode, there is not the slightest
participation of "our" Enterprise NX-01, except for the historical
personnel files from the Defiant that Mirror Archer and Sato read with amusement
and astonishment. One might say this is overall for the benefit of continuity,
as our universe will not become aware of the existence of the parallel reality until
more than a hundred years later. On the other hand, a story that doesn't tell anything
about the crew and the mission of our starship is completely pointless in the
course of the series. Something like that has been done before with varying
success especially on Voyager ("Living Witness", "Course:
Oblivion", "11:59"), but it is sad to have such a stagnancy a few
weeks before the series ends (much to soon).
Remarkable quote: "Without Vulcan technology the Empire wouldn't be where it
is today." (Mirror Archer) -- Read it again, compare it to what
"our" Archer always says about the Vulcans and enjoy the irony!
The Mirror characters: Captain Forrest commands the ISS Enterprise. Commander
Archer is the first officer. T'Pol (with long hair) has much the same role as in
our universe. Reed is a MACO major, he invented the torturing booth. Mayweather
is a MACO sergeant. Hoshi Sato was Forrest's concubine and becomes Archer's. She
used to work in Brazil like in our universe. Trip has a disfigured face because
of delta radiation (the make-up is a homage to TOS: "The Menagerie").
Remarkable species: We see a Tholian for the first time since TOS: "The
Tholian Web". The look is consistent with Commander Loskene from the TOS
episode although I was always convinced that the angular head was just a helmet.
The insectoid Tholians are said to have both male and female characteristics.
Remarkable facts: In our universe Hoshi Sato will develop the linguacode
translation matrix in her late thirties. Archer is considered to be "the
greatest explorer of the 22nd century. Two planets were named after him."
Rating: 7
Demons January
19th, 2155: While the Enterprise crew is attending a meeting of Minister Samuels
with alien delegates on Earth, a fatally injured woman stumbles into the
conference room. She warns T'Pol that someone is threatening her life and hands her a
lock of hair. To everyone's surprise Phlox finds out that the hair is from a
child with Vulcan and human DNA, a girl whose parents are T'Pol and Tucker. The
woman whose name was Susan Khouri has been working for an isolationist movement
known as "Terra Prime". Phlox' analysis that she used to take a
medication against zero-g effects allows the crew to trace back her way. While
T'Pol and Trip infiltrate the mining colony Orpheus on Earth's Moon,
Mayweather's love interest, the journalist Gannett Brooks, is arrested as a spy
working for Terra Prime. On the Moon Trip is invited to join an assembly of
Terra Prime supporters. But he and T'Pol are uncovered. Paxton, the owner of
Orpheus and leader of Terra Prime, orders the colony, which he has transformed to
a large starship, to lift off and head for Mars. On Mars he takes possession of a
verteron weapon and he demands that every alien leave the Sol System...

We may have expected an episode dealing with humans' reactions to
aliens rather at the very beginning of Enterprise than at a time just before the
series finale when the writers are in a hurry to establish a perspective for the
future Federation. In this regard "Demons" was definitely a setback.
At times I even felt reminded of the Mirror Universe feature "In a Mirror,
Darkly", seeing that "our" world isn't that different in essence.
It may be just a minority, but here is a group of humans who are not willing to
practice basic tolerance and who strive to ban or ultimately destroy everyone
troubling them as "alien". Xenophobia as we sadly know it from our
time and as already hinted at in a skillful sub-plot of "Home"
is a very dumb contempt, largely bereft of a deeper significance. As a
motive in a TV drama it facilitates the creation of detestable villains. On the
other hand, anything like this is likely to turn into a story full of
accordingly cheap clichés. But I won't carry on with my usual rant about TV
Nazis at this time. On the contrary, I am pleasantly surprised how realistically
"Demons" embeds the issue into the context of the 22nd century. If the
plot stunt of the Xindi attack in "The Expanse"
had one long-lasting beneficial impact on the series, it is that it allowed for this week's
episode.
As already mentioned (it can't be said often enough) xenophobia is stupid by its
very nature. Hordes of xenophobic morons, who harass "freaks" for just
being different, are bad enough. But it becomes horrible when this happens in an
organized fashion, authorized by a leader. With Hitler and the Nazis being the
most obvious examples in real history. Paxton is meant to be the 22nd century
version of such a leader, which is even corroborated by his unveiled admiration
of Colonel Green, who was apparently responsible for the killing of hundreds of
thousands of radiation victims after World War III -- because Green saw them as
"impure". 200 years after Hitler and 100 years after Green, Paxton's
plans are in the same bad tradition. Unfortunately Paxton can't make a point
beyond the simple statement "I'm a fascist" in this first part of the
story. He remains the stereotypical villain because he doesn't primarily act as an
enticer. Instead of manipulating people he rather relies on all kinds of
technology like other TV villains before him. Starling from VOY: "Future's
End" springs to my mind as a similar character, although the computer
tycoon was just greedy. In this one respect I would have hoped for a toned down
story in "Demon", one that would have given us more insight into
Paxton's methods and his motivation. We can still hope for next week.
Regarding the characters, I wasn't particularly impressed by any of them. But
that may have to do with me paying attention to all the details of the story. It
wasn't as easy as usual to follow its course. Well, Mayweather had a part too,
but I didn't really care for it, nor did I care for his girl-friend. Their
involvement was too superficial so far, and I don't really expect Mayweather to
do more next week than steer a shuttlepod to apprehend the villain.
Remarkable quote: "They are extremely precise - though when I'm
listening to the Tellarite Ambassador I wish they were a little less
precise." (Minister Samuels to Hoshi about the universal translator)
Remarkable facts: The emblem on the floor of the conference hall reads:
"Starfleet Command - United Earth Space Probe Agency". The Tellarites,
Andorians, Vulcans, Rigelians and Coridanites were present at the conference
(although I remember Coridanites from "Shadows of P'Jem" as looking
very different).
Rating: 6
Terra Prime January
22nd, 2155: Paxton is targeting Starfleet Command with the verteron array which
was initially built to deflect asteroids. In order to knock out the weapon
without harming T'Pol, Tucker, the child and the neighboring Utopia Colony, it
is necessary to get inside Paxton's ship. Archer, Phlox, Reed and Mayweather
follow the path of a comet to the surface of Mars so they remain unnoticed. They
manage to overwhelm Paxton just in time. Back on Enterprise, it turns out that
Gannett Brooks was not actually a Terra Prime agent, but a young ensign working
in shuttle maintenance is found guilty of sabotage in Paxton's name. He commits
suicide before Archer's eyes. Phlox discovers that the child who Tucker and
T'Pol have named Elizabeth is going to die because Paxton purposely created her
with a genetic defect. The doctor says that generally Vulcan and human DNA are
compatible.

With the exception of the shuttle ride on the comet's tail and
the beautiful shots of the surface of Mars, the second part of the xenophobia
arc turned out overall less spectacular than the first one. As I see it, this
was mostly not to the episode's disadvantage. Although "Terra Prime"
suffered even more from unproductive and unessential plot add-ons, it made up
for much of the lack of characterization and interaction that I criticized in my
review of "Demons".
Still, I would have expected more from Paxton. T'Pol was refreshingly blunt when
she exposed the hypocrisy and self-delusion of the Terra Prime leader. Suffering
from the Taggart Syndrome, he wouldn't even be alive without a medication
developed by aliens. And as it is a form of genetic damage, his role model
Colonel Green would have euthanized Paxton. Usually dogmatic leaders don't react
at all to such open reproaches except with violence. Paxton at least attempted to
evade the dilemma by referring to history: "I'm not the first
significant leader who failed to measure up to his own ideals." It was
the same with Hitler who looked anything like the blond, athletic and healthy
archetype he valued above all. The message is clear: Racism was, is and will
always be hypocritical and dishonest. A big lie. Paxton gave more insight into
his ideology than last week or felt compelled to do so, but at some point I
would have liked him to react on the confrontation with more than just phrases. Not that I knew any of their kind personally, but I doubt that dictators or
terrorists talk in private like they do in the public. The contrast between the
charismatic leader that Paxton strove to be and the pitiful person he actually
was could have been worked out better. Maybe, instead of breaking together with the vengeful
words "Terra Prime forever" on his lips, it should have been
shown how he was arrested, as the weak man that remained without all the helpers and the
technology.
The relationship between T'Pol and Tucker saw a small progress at long last, and
if only because of the exceptional and sad experience of having a common child
who was about to die. Sato (who did a fine job commanding the ship in Archer's
absence), Reed and Phlox all had a couple of good scenes too. Bakula, on the
other hand, was acting a bit lethargically most of the time. Maybe this was even
intentional, to show how Archer is tired of saving the planet all the time? Anyway,
to Archer it was palpably primarily a matter of freeing his officers; the
parallel between their fathers that Paxton made up was a pathetic attempt to
grab his attention, to involve him personally. Like I anticipated, Mayweather
was at least allowed to steer the shuttle. His girl-friend, on the other hand,
contributed absolutely nothing to the story. The two-parter could have easily done without this relationship
that didn't work out anyway. Speaking of
dispensable plot ingredients, the previously nameless ensign, who was presented
as the culprit, is another one.
Remarkable facts: We learn a bit about the colonization of Mars. The verteron
array was built to deflect incoming comets. (Well, how unlikely is it that a big comet
impacts on Mars just in the hours before the ultimatum runs out?) The
terraforming has progressed to a point where no pressure suits are necessary in
the lowlands of Mars. We get to see the landing site of Pathfinder, which the
NASA named "Carl Sagan Memorial Station" in 1997 (the dedication
plaque definitely being a later addition).
Crew losses: 1
Rating: 6
These Are The
Voyages Stardate 47457.1: Commander Riker is anxiously awaiting the
confrontation with Admiral Pressman, his former commanding officer who is
responsible for a test of an illegal cloaking device that killed 73 of the crew
of the Pegasus. Riker takes a break in the holodeck and he invites Deanna Troi
to re-enact the last mission of Enterprise NX-01 prior to being decommissioned.
Back in 2161, Shran asked Archer to help him free his abducted daughter. They
succeeded, but later the kidnappers boarded the ship. In an act of self-sacrifice Trip
blew up a plasma conduit and died. The holoprogram ends with Archer's speech at
the founding ceremony of the Federation. Riker decides to let Captain Picard in
on the true circumstances of the Pegasus disaster.

Since the very first announcement I was
opposed to Enterprise. I was convinced that Berman and Braga were joking when I
saw their first list with blatantly stereotypical character
drafts, and I
thought even more so when the first pictures of the ship cropped up. I believed
I would never get accustomed to Series V, much less that it would grow on me. I
was wrong. Fortunately, because many single episodes of the first three years
and nearly the complete fourth season lived up to the premise and gave us
memorable moments of television. Not primarily stuff for nerds or for action
fans, but quality entertainment with an attitude. Enterprise had several flaws,
most of which I had predicted. It may not have been the most original or the
most compelling Trek show. But it ultimately proved to be a worthy part of the
legacy, as worthy as any of its four predecessors. My heartfelt thanks go to the
creative staff, and in particular to Manny Coto, Judith & Garfield
Reeves-Stevens and Mike Sussman, who did a terrific job.
However, even a mediocre show wouldn't have deserved to be dumped like this.
With an abysmal installment that pretends in its unprecedented self-glorifying
fashion to celebrate the series and to unite the fans but actually does quite
the contrary. An episode that was hard to endure because of its artificiality
and overall irrelevance of dialogues and interaction. I was glad when it was
over. I'm trying not to be malicious, but it happened just when Berman and Braga
used their privilege as executive producers and came up with a story by
themselves.
To start with, "These Are The Voyages" does not actually belong to
Star Trek Enterprise. It is a TNG episode, and a very pointless one because it
just fills a gap in an existing plot of "The
Pegasus" with some trivia. The parallels between Riker's present
situation and that of Enterprise NX-01 are awkwardly fabricated at best, and the
plausibility how the edutainment could help against Riker's qualms escapes me.
Almost nothing that we see of Riker's holodeck program is fully authentic and
could depict exactly what happened back in 2161. The long-dead characters on
Enterprise NX-01 are reduced to holographic projections and condemned to engage
in trifling conversations most of the time. And worse, Archer and the others are
not even speaking for themselves, they are just talking the way they are
programmed, however correctly the characters themselves and their mission are
modeled. This applies especially to their visits to "Chef" Riker's
kitchen (as if all the senior officers had sought the chef's advice back in
2161). The weak parallel that is constructed in that the chef is the 22nd
century version of a counselor doesn't help to make it in any way more plausible
or more relevant. I couldn't even decide which is shoddier: Riker as he creates
his own version of history, pulling the chef's character off the hat and
interviewing a phony crew. Or rather Riker as a bystander (or should I say
voyeur?) of events neither he nor anyone else in the 24th century could and
should know so intimately. I don't mean that it is a bad or even immoral idea
from the perspective of Riker's time. On the contrary, using the holodeck like
this is an intelligent way to seek distraction and also an appropriate means of
historical research. I would have loved such a re-enactment as a little tie-in
in a genuine TNG episode. But not as a plot outline in a different series, and
least of all in its series finale. It's just a holodeck simulation and not
anything that is of any significance for the crew of Enterprise NX-01 -- just
like the recent Mirror Universe two-parter, only with a poor premise and
execution and at the worst possible time. Furthermore, "These Are The
Voyages" relates to TNG like "11:59" to
Voyager. The reason for my rant is essentially the same in both cases, only that
it's much sadder now that a series finale and the preliminary end of Star Trek on TV
is ruined.
I don't know why it was deemed necessary to kill off Trip. Because it was
supposed to be realistic considering the ship's dangerous mission? Because it
would give the characters in the otherwise straightforward plot some emotional
involvement? Because the crew's only visible progress in the years between 2155
and 2161 was getting new patches on their uniforms, and Trip's death would make
up for that in a bizarre fashion? Because in every series at least one of the
main cast died, and if only temporarily? Because it was a way to say that
Enterprise is dead and buried? Anyway, I don't like the whole idea, especially
under the given circumstances that it happens on the holodeck and therefore
somehow "off-screen". More on a side note, where are the darn security
and MACOs after the intruder alert? Trip spends a couple of minutes distracting
the gangsters and no one comes to help him. Is this just another inaccuracy of
the simulation?
As if the treatment of the Enterprise characters had not yet been bad enough
because of the mere premise, there are two particular examples where the episode
rides roughshod over them. The first is when Riker "resurrects" Trip
who has died a few minutes earlier. Again, Riker has any right to do that; it is
his simulation. But how impious can a writer be to play with a character like
that, above all Trip with his many fans who are sad about his demise? The second
annoyance along the same lines is when Riker ends the holoprogram just when
Archer is about to begin his speech as if this part of the story wouldn't matter
any longer. Once again it becomes clear that despite the good intention the
episode does anything but pay respect to Enterprise. The only part of the show
that truly builds a bridge between the different series of the franchise is the
very ending, with the visuals of the ships and the voice-overs moving from
Picard over Kirk to Archer.
Rick Berman said about "These Are The Voyages": "One of the reasons we did it is we wanted to say kind of a 'thank you' to people who watched not only Enterprise but some of the other
shows." On another occasion Brannon Braga called it a "Valentine
to all of Star Trek". I doubt that any flavor of fans will cherish the
miscarried tribute. I wish it hadn't been made in the first place. "Terra
Prime" was not exactly the best installment of the season, but it would
have made a far better fitting finale. Although I can just speak for myself, I
think in the hearts of the fans the series will have ended one episode earlier.
Remarkable quote: "Here's to the Next Generation." (Archer)
Remarkable facts: The crew of the Pegasus includes Ronald Moore, Dawn Velazquez,
Eric Motz, Andy Simonson and Phil Wallace. Moore, Velazquez and Simonson are
staff members of Trek series and features, the other two names possibly too. The
TNG guest cast consists not only of Marina Sirtis as Deanna, Jonathan Frakes
as Riker and Brent Spiner as Data's voice. In addition, Majel Roddenberry speaks the computer voice of the
Enterprise-D. Real-life astronauts Mike Fincke and Terry Virts have guest
appearances. Finally, Manny Coto can be seen as an admiral attending the
ceremony.
Rating: 0
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